thespectre1's Reviews

[MusicBot: Harder, Faster]

Epic

Love the anim and how you worked the letters =D
also, spark wolf, it says Makes us, but there's not enough letter room, so it says "Makess" then the S switches to a U.
Pay attention man

[With My Mind's Madness]

Amazing

Just Pure awesome, and i love the rough style, it's a personal art fetish i got ;D
Music score was perfect, if it hadn't been for the credits music that INSTANTLY ruined the mood.
Maybe You'd think it was funny, fit to your character, but it doesn't fit the flash and it's mood, it's the main reason i stopped watching this movie.

[Awesome Compilation Vol 6]

NIIICE

Rly awesome there.
Loved the Easter egg too.
Can someone get the story of animal fat some words fell out, ddnt quite catch it all lol

[OrbEater]

Loved this misunderstanded game

I look around and i see alot of reviews saying there's nothing in this game but collecting balls, and it gets pretty boring.
Reviews written by people who read the name OrbEater and were looking for a geometry wars type game where you end up with sweaty palms and a broken keyboard.
But i see this game was meant to be this way, it was meant to be calm and soothing, so noted by the choice of graphics and soundtrack.
I see it's a game made to unwind and sit back and enjoy the beautiful view of the sky having nothing to worry about but the colors of balls.
You did a good job at that, i hope people look at that before reviewing, or tell me if i'm wrong.

[Robot Dinosaurs]

Epic Concept

Well, the concept of the game couldnt have been awesomer, but the execution could use some touchups.
The characters, especially me were too big for the screen, as well as the obstacles....fix up the proportions, and get a better roar :D
Other than that, Epic.

One question tho....is it just me or do the dino's Shoop Da Woop???

[Pwong]

Awesome game man

Suckish PC and still ddnt lag, awesome effects and music, and concept.
Hide the cursor, it's annoying

[Check Me Out]

Epic

The was awesome man......only too short, never got it's chance.....you should make an extension, i like the idea of this piece

[Breast]

Very nice, but....

There are some avoidable imperfections like for example, the nose ring looks like a cheap keychain ring picked off the floor, and it doesnt match the necklace which shows style and mild sophistication, and the nostrils are disturbingly small, also the mouth is tilted at a very awkward angle to the chin, if she'd tried to make it like that it'd wrinkle the face and would even take a different position.
on the good side i lOVE the shading and the style, the hair is brilliant, the neck...armpit's abit wierd and flat, but you did a rly nice and sharp job with the collar bone =D

/critisism
now that my artistic brain is set aside...MAKE BIGGER BOOBS!!

ornery responds:

The problem with live models is that they have a tendancy to move a bit, especially facial orientation, so when one part gets more or less set the other parts move. Normally I would just make the correction without using how it really is, but in this case she did have a slightly crooked mouth, maybe not that extreme, but it was slanted. As for the nose ring, bad choice of jewelry on her part, it pretty much was just one of those key chain rings.

[Emani]

Color it

Should be really awesome once you do, also is it just me or the head's too small?

[gotham city]

Quite good

Shading is quite decent, but you should work a lot on your perspective and geometry if you wanna make a believable building

williamreinsch responds:

yeah lol, im shit at buildings :( ill be better soon though woop