Awesomness
Love the animation and the style, MOAR PLZ
Awesomness
Love the animation and the style, MOAR PLZ
Stuff you need to work on
The story was cool, and the art'n'animation were cool and all, considering you dont practice much. so my advice is...do that
practice alot, you gotta get to know the feel on timing and how to control the speed of animation, cuz the car hitting the bike was lowspeed and ddnt have the momentum to throw him as much as it did. and the storyline got abit boring at times cuz it was too slowly animated.
Btw i like the way he dresses, lol, keep up the good work.
Love it
Loved the movie as much as i loved NIN, good luck in the contest and let us know how it turns out.
But next time you might wanna be consistent with y'r line thicknesses, cuz the thin lines were perfect for y'r style, but then there was a shot of the man's face where he had his hand on his cheek, those had noticably thicker lines.
Still, awesome
Thanks muchly. Yes, I agree about the lines. I have a tendancy to change styles in the middle of projects, or just on certain shots. In earlier animations it was a lot worse, so hopefully it will get better with time :)
-Dan
WB man!!!
WELCOME BACK DUDE, and dont you ever leave us again :'(
THAT WAS FUCKING AWESOME
You know why i gave you a 9?
CUZ YOU DDNT FINISH IT, i hate you
FINISH IT ALREADY, it's so fucking awesome, i cant wait
OMG
OMG TOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!
I LOLED!!!!!!!!!!!
i'm gonna go watch again
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